As a last minute review, I decided to talk with my tutor about my essay. I don't know why I left it so late and I know that time management should have been one of my priorities. However, there were just some last minute issues that I wanted to address.
One of the issues that was brought up in this review was my use of the first person within my essay. I don't know why I didn't realise this before but I talked a lot in the first person and in academic writing this is something that is not supposed to be done. It's quite silly of me not to notice such a simple mistake. Some of my points in my essay were backed up by my own opinion when it really should have been backed up by practicing theorists.
I have made the changes to my essay and I think that it is much stronger and more professional now. I am glad that I went to talk to my tutor although some times this prospect scares me and gives me anxiety. I know that I need to push through this sometimes because having experts opinion is helpful with the progression of things you have only seen with your own eyes.
Monday 24 April 2017
Saturday 22 April 2017
Thursday 20 April 2017
cop: webpages I used for my essay
http://www.ukiyoe-gallery.com/uchida.htm
- modern woodblock printers still working in japan
http://www.baxleystamps.com/litho/misc/uchida_woodblock_prints.shtml
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