today was my crit with richard about my essay and how it is right now. some key points:
- a good start but seems unfinished
- not enough research
- i need to be more confident, get rid of 'i think' and use 'this is'
- some changes to some of my wording
- bring in theories and utilise them
- make sure to add people's opinions on images that i choose
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